My Best Author and the worst

The story that i mostly liked is " once upon a time". There are some intersting topics and he is so amazing of choosing the items and related it to the topic that he has chosen. Moreover, he wrote in appropriate  way of writing. However, the worst story that I found many mistakes like grammar, and spellings. such as "I think learn countries can learn from a lot of crafts".


http://en191fl12s28mohamedto.blogspot.com, August 31, 2012

http://yifuchen.blogspot.com, September 3,2012